Children's Book Assessment

The last few weeks in photoshop we have been working on, designing and creating our own children's story books. The requirements for this assessment were to create 5 completely original characters ad put them into 2 separate A3 spreads (so 4 pages of a 16 page book).
We then have been asked to upload the final products to our blogs.
The following is my Story.


Once there lived a starfish named Sammy, a jellyfish named Jack, and a fish named Frankie.
They were the best of friends and did everything together.
On the opposite side of town lived a small, lonely crab named Candice.
Sammy, jack and Frankie were very mean to Candice, they teased her and called her names.
One day Sammy, Jack and Frankie were swimming in the park when all of a sudden..
"WHY DO YOU THINK YOU CAN PICK ON CANDICE!" Bellowed a deep voice from within the
seaweed.
‘’Who was that?’’ asked Jack nervously.
‘’My name is Wally, Wally the whale and I have heard you three have been picking on Candice.’’
"I’m sorry, we didn’t know that we were hurting her’’ claimed Frankie.
"Well you are and I think that you all owe her an apology."
After swimming for a while they came across a sad little crab crying quietly by herself.
‘‘Candice what is wrong? We are all so sorry for being rude to you. Can you ever forgive us?’’
Asked Jack, Sammy and Frankie apologetically.
‘‘Well you did hurt me, I don’t like being called names’’ claimed Candice.
‘‘I know, we are all so sorry Candice!’’
After talking for a while, Candice finally agreed to forgive them and from that day on, they all
played happily together in the park.

Spreads